Among the several posts I liked Brenna's, Srishti Singh's and
Vanessa's the most. But I felt that Vanessa's is the best because I found the
visuals strong and the text tells us more about the photos. I found her post
really thoughtful. Starting from her childhood photograph, it is a long shot
with a house in the background and Vanessa is collecting the paddy rice. The
photograph is astonishing to me because such a small kid is trying to drag that
equipment which seems so heavy. The determination and dedication that can be
seen on her face is really worth appreciating. I think the photo must be taken
in the late day light around 11.30 AM. I like the way the pattern that got
created after dragging matches the shape that the house has formed in the
background which is curve. Also that little girl seen in the top left corner of
the photograph watching Vanessa adds another life in the photograph. And the
dark patch on the building (near the stairs) is balanced by what I think to be
a shadow in the bottom right corner. This picture is unique in my eyes because
usually in childhood photos children are either playing, having fun in water,
posed with a telephone etc. But this is different from all those and she is
still having fun doing it.
I found the second
photo to be perfect because I agree to what she has written about it. Yes even
to me I remember her as a girl who comes from Panvel which is so far. What I
really liked about the photo is that the way she has successfully captured what
she wanted to which is the train, board with 'Panvel' on it and her face. Had
it been a mid shot I think it would not have been that effective.
Her last picture is very
clear. She says she is confused but the picture tells that whatever she does she
would like to be at the top. Though the face of the figure in the picture is
blank it got a smile on my face because of the gesture it has shown with its
hands.
1 comment:
Thank you Tanmayi,
You have very well understood,analyzed and positively put across the message I wished to convey through my "me" post.
Thanks for the appreciation.
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